Comparing Literature: Exercise II

Poems

The confusions and absurdities expressed by Hardy and Williamson in the Exercise I should indicate that any previously held perceptions about the Great War as a conflict being between ally and enemy, Englishman and foreigner, or good and evil, should be dismissed.

This next exercise requires such an awareness. Below is a selection of poems from soldiers of various nationalities who fought in the War. In this exercise you are asked to:

  1. Read all of the poems. Each provides an annotated version of the poem giving you some introductory details. When you select a poem you will be presented with it in English (possibly its original language but more likely to be a translation) with some limited additional information.

  2. Once you have read all the poems you can choose the nationality which you think reflects the nationality of the poet. 

    The poems are selected from from a variety of nationalities, though they have all been translated into English (N.B. more than one poem may originate from the same country). Your task now, using the clues available in the poems, is to state the country of origin of the poet. Beside each poem is a series of WWI nationalities representing a range of possible countries (Great Britain, the German Empire, the United States, Austria-Hungary, France, Italy).

Leaving for the Front

Read the poem below then choose the tab above of the country you think represents the nationality of the poet.

Leaving for the Front

 

Before I die I must just find this rhyme.
Be quiet, my friends, and do not waste my time.

We're marching off in company with death.
I only wish my girl would hold her breath.

There's nothing wrong with me. I'm glad to leave. (5)
Now mother's crying too. There's no reprieve.

And now look how the sun's begun to set.
A nice mass-grave is all that I shall get.

Once more the good old sunset's glowing red.
In thirteen days I'll probably be dead. (10)

Notes

Be quiet, my friends, and do not waste my time. (L.2)
The simple rhyming structure and address of 'my friends' gives a placid, almost childlike feel to the poem; heightened by the rhyming couplets. This is understandable as the poet in question also wrote books for children.

with death (L. 3)
The foreboding of the poem is brought in at an early stage. Death marches with them, even though there is nothing wrong with the poet  (l. 5) - yet.

I only wish my girl would hold her breath (L. 4) There is almost a sense of embarrasment here. The soldier, in his new company, is leaving the old familiarities (his 'girl' and his 'mother'), but both women are showing too much emotion, where as the soldier reinforces his own resolve by stating There's nothing wrong with me (L. 5).

the sun's begun to set (L. 7)
One can infer from this that the soldiers are marching westwards, into the red dusk of the setting sun. The glowing red of l. 9 foreshadows the blood that will be shed to fill line 8's mass grave.

In thirteen days I'll probably be dead. (L. 10)
The poet died in 1914.

Great Britain - Incorrect!  Great Britain

The poem was originally written in German and you are being presented with a translation here. The poet fought for the Central Powers during the War, not the Allies. The simple style relates in part to the fact that the poet had worked with children's literature earlier, and also to his adoption of the modernist approaches.

German Empire - Correct!  German Empire

The poem was written by Alfred Lichtenstein (1889-194) in the first few weeks of the War. Lichtenstein was born in Berlin, a Prussian Jew, and was educated in Law at University. He originally made his name writing a children's book Die Geschichten des Onkel Krause (The Stories of Uncle Krause).
He also began to experiment eraly on with modernist approaches to poetry, although 'Leaving for the Front' seems more attuned to the former genre, reflecting a simple nursery rhyme in its jaunty metrical structure and structure. In October 1913 Lichtenstein
began his compulsory one year's military service, but never left the ranks as after the declaration of War his regiment, the 2nd Bavarian Infantry, was sent directly to the front. Lichtenstein died of wounds after an attack at Vermandovillers on the
Somme on the 24th September 1914. It is ironic that Vermandovillers was retaken 4 years later (nearly to the day) by Wilfred Owen's regiment.

 

The original poem is entitled 'Abschied' and retains the simple rhyme structure of the translation:

 

Vorm Sterben mache ich noch mein Gedicht.

Still, Kameraden, stört mich nicht.

 

Wir ziehn sum Krieg. Der Tod is unser Kitt.

O, heulte mir doch die Geliebte nit.

 

Was liegt an mir. Ich gehe gerne ein.

Die Mutter weint. Man muß aus Eisen sein.

 

Die Sonne fällt zum Horizont hinab.

Bald wirft man mich ins milde Massengrab.

 

Am Himmel brennt das brave Abendrot.

Vielleicht bin ich in dreizehn Tagen tot.

United States - Incorrect!  United States

The poem was originally written in German and you are being presented with a translation here. The poet fought for the Central Powers during the War, not the Allies. The simple style relates in part to the fact that the poet had worked with children's
literature earlier, and also to his adoption of the mdoernist approaches.

Austria-Hungary - Incorrect!  Austrian Empire

However you are close. The poem was written in German originally and the poet fought for the Central Powers. The simple style relates in part to the fact that the poet had worked with children's literature earlier, and also to his adoption of the mdoernist
approaches.

France - Incorrect!  France

The poem was originally written in German and you are being presented with a translation here. The poet fought for the Central Powers during the War, not the Allies. The simple style relates in part to the fact that the poet had worked with children's literature earlier, and also to his adoption of the mdoernist approaches.

Italy - Incorrect!  Italy

The poem was originally written in German and you are being presented with a translation here. The poet fought for the Central Powers during the War, not the Allies. The simple style relates in part to the fact that the poet had worked with children's
literature earlier, and also to his adoption of the mdoernist approaches.

Gala

Read the poem below then choose the tab above of the country you think represents the nationality of the poet.

Gala

Skyrocket burst of hardened steel

A charming light on this fair place

These technicians' tricks appeal

Mixing with courage a little grace

Two star shells first

In rose pink burst

Two breasts you lay bare with a laugh

Offer their insolent tips

............ HERE LIES
ONE WHO COULD LOVE


..................some epitaph

A poet in the forest sees

Indifferent able to cope

His revolver catch at safe

Roses dying of their hope

Thinks of Saadi's roses then

Bows his head draws down his lip

As a rose reminds him of

The softer curving of a hip

The air is full of a terrible

Liquor from half shut stars distilled

Projectiles stroke the soft nocturnal
Perfume 
with your image filled

Where the roses all are killed

Notes

Gala (Title)
Gala - a day of festivity. The poem is addressed to André Rouveyre, a writer and artist.
 
Skyrocket burst of hardened steel (L. 1)
The poet served in the artillery on the front line. The visual imagery of the first two (and last) stanzas paints a vivid picture of an artillery bombradment.
 
In rose pink burst (L. 6)
The poet was an advocate of the new forms of art emerging at the beginning of the twentieth-century. He embraced modernism, and the start of surrealism. In this line, he plays with the colours of the artillery shells bursting in the night sky, by likening them to the almost collage-like appearance of red and pink exploding (mixing in images of bloodshed.) Note how the rose continually appears throughout the poem, bursting with light here, dying in l. 14, having deeper significance in lines 15 and 17, and then being killed in the last line.
 
HERE LIES ONE WHO COULD LOVE (L. 9)
The poet plays with punctuation and typesetting throughout the poem, here mimicking the inscription of a tombstone. The lack of punctuation throughout the poem mirrors other writers (e.g. Joyce, Faulkner, etc.).
 
Saadi's roses (L. 15)
This is a reference to the The Gulistan of Saadi, a 13th-century Persian (Iranian) poem by Sheikh Muslih-uddin Saadi Shirazi. 'Gulistan' means 'rose garden' and the text is based around a series of stories related to various flowers.
 
Projectiles stroke the soft nocturnal/Perfume (Ll. 21-22)
In a criticism of this poet the poet is described as using
 
vocabulary that is traditionally poetic as well as familiar or vulgar terms. Erudition rubs shoulders with banality, the exotic with the everyday, the refined and the obscene
 
His images are:
 
not to be constructed around a single monolithic image. Rather, they tend to include a variety of images in surprise juxtaposition. The Surrealist poet Tristan Tzara called them 'images de choc' whose force is precisely that of their ability to shock or surprise the reader.

Great Britain - Incorrect!  Great Britain

Although the poet served in one of the armies of the Allies from 1914 to 1918 he was not British. The style of the poem (modernist) perhaps illustrates a mainland European background; and in fact that poet was one of the founding members of modernism and the first to coin the phrase 'surrealism'. Furthermore, the poem was not originally written in English (i.e. this is a translation, though it retains the structure of the lines).

German Empire - Inorrect!  German Empire

The style of the poem (modernist) does illustrate a mainland European background (where the movement originated); and in fact that poet was one of the founding members of modernism and the first to coin the phrase 'surrealism'. The clue is that the poem's original title was 'Fête'.

United States - Incorrect!  United States

The poet enlisted in an artillery regiment right at the beginning of the War (three years before the US entered into the conflict). Although many US men did enlist in the armies of Europe between 1914 and 1917, the style of the poem (modernist) perhaps illustrates a European background. Furthermore, the poem was not originally written in English (i.e. this is a translation, though it reatins the structure of the lines).

Austria-Hungary - Incorrect!  Austrian Empire

The style of the poem (modernist) does illustrate a mainland European background (where the movement originated); and in fact that poet was one of the founding members of modernism and the first to coin the phrase 'surrealism'. The clue is that the poem's original title was 'Fête'.

France - Correct!  France

The poem was written by the French poet Guilaume Apollinaire (1880-1918). However, to state that Apollinaire (born Wilhelm de Krostrowitsky) was French is perhaps misleading. He was Born in Rome to a Polish mother and Italian father, and only left Italy for Monaco when he was 8. However, thereafter he assimilated French culture and language and is generally considered one of the finest French poets and writers of the 20th-century. Apollinaire enlisted in the French artillery at the beginning of the War, having already established himself amongst the literary and artistic circles of Paris and Berlin as a leading modernist, and was the first to coin the phrase 'surrealism' (later adopted by the Breton school). He was also a notable journalist, and France's leading authority on contemporary art. Apollinaire eventually attained a commission and his war service was long, but ultimately tragic. He was wounded in 1916 and deemed unfit for combat retruned to Paris. However he never fully recovered from the wound and depsite continued treatment in hospital he died from the influenza epidemic in November 1918 two days before the Armistice. One of his last statements before he died was: 'Save me doctor! I want to live! I still have so much to say!'. However, during his time at the front the exhilaration and spectacle of modern warfare clearly had a great impact on him. As Peter Read notes: 'Lines explode at all angles over the page...throughout his war poetry Apollinaire does include the havoc wrought at ground level'. The poem presented here is entitled 'Fête' in the original.

Italy - Incorrect!  Italy

The style of the poem (modernist) does illustrate a mainland European background (where the movement originated); and in fact that poet was one of the founding members of modernism and the first to coin the phrase 'surrealism'. The clue is that the poem's original title was 'Fête'.

Grodek

Grodek

At nightfall the autumn woods cry out
With deadly weapons, and the golden plains
The  deep blue lakes, above which more darkly
Rolls the sun; the night embraces
Dying warriors, the wild lament
Of their broken mouths.

But quietly there in the pastureland
Red clouds in which an angry god resides,
The shed blood gathers, lunar coolness.
All the roads lead to the blackest carrion. (10)
Under golden twigs of the night and stars
The sister's shade now sways through the silent copse
To greet the ghosts of the heroes, the bleeding heads;
And softly the dark flutes of autumn sound in the reeds.
O prouder grief! You brazen altars(15)
Today a great pain feeds the hot flame of the spirit,
The grandsons yet unborn.

Notes

Grodek (Title)
A town now located in the Ukraine.

the autumn woods cry out (L.1)
Implying that the attack in progress is an attack on nature. Indeed the personification of nature throughout the poem raises it to the status of victim.
 
deep blue lakes (L. 3)
The use of colour throughout the poem is striking. In the previous line the plains are described as golden, we have the later red clouds of line 8, and the black carrion of line 10.
 
the night embraces/Dying warriors, the wild lament/Of their broken mouths. (Ll. 4-6)
The poet served in the Medical Corps and witnessed the horrific injuries of war first hand. The scenes he endured brought on insanity, and whilst under treatment at a military hospital he committed suicide by taking poison. He died in 1914.
 
an angry god (L. 8)
Mythological imagery seems to predominate, in fact the absence of Christian motifs is noticeable. This is an age-old conflict in which gods of war and thunder reside in the heaven, the moon looks on impassively, and ghostly figures stalk to the woods to welcome heroes now dead.
 
the blackest carrion (L. 10)
It is common in Old Norse/Germanic literature to accentuate the fighting by introducing the motif of the 'beasts of battle' — the wolves, ravens, and crows the feast on the corpses of the slain.
 
brazen altars (L.15)
There is a clear sense of sacrifice here. The broken dying warriors (L. 5) have been slaughtered, their blood shed (L. 9) on the brazen altars.
 
The grandsons yet unborn (L. 17)
The pain and loss here is elevated when the poet reminds us of the future lives and generations that have been lost by the premature death of their forefathers.

Great Britain - Incorrect!  Great Britain

The classical references and pastoral images are certainly reminiscent of Grenfell and other British poets, but similar motifs can be found in all European literature. Similarly the closing line bemoaning 'The grandsons yet unborn' is similar to Wilfred Owen's 'undone years' in 'Strange Meeting', but again the recognition of that the death of the individual means the cutting off of future generations is Universal. The major clue to the poem's origin is the title, 'Grodek', which depicts a battle fought on the Eastern Front in 1914.

German Empire - Incorrect!  German Empire

However you are close to the right answer. The major clue to the poem's origin is the title, 'Grodek', which depicts a battle fought on the Eastern Front in 1914, i.e. where the Central Powers (Germany and Austria-Hungary in the main) took on the Russian armies. The poem was written in German but the poet's nationality is not German.

United States - Incorrect!  United States

The major clue to the poem's origin is the title, 'Grodek', which depicts a battle fought on the Eastern Front in 1914, i.e. where the Central Powers (Germany and Austria-Hungary in the main) took on the Russian armies. Although many American men volunteered to fight in the War before the US entered in 1917 the majority (but by no means all) fought for the Allies.

Austria-Hungary - Correct!  Austrian Empire

'Grodek' was written by the Austro-Hungarian poet Georg Trakl (1887-1914). Trakl was born in Salzburg of Slav descent, with his family originating from Hungary. Although he showed a keen interest in literature and philosophy throughout his childhood, his career after school was to train as a dispensing chemist (possibly fuelling his growing drug addiction). In the 1900s he dabbled in drama, but in 1912 his work as a poet was recognised publishing in the journal Der Brenner, finally publishing his first book of of poems in 1913 (but by this time he was a confirmed drug addict). His work was recognised by Wittgenstein as displaying 'the tone of true genius', but Trakl's career never had a chance to fully flourish for in August 1914 he was commissioned as a Lieutenant in the Medical Corps of the Austrian army. At the battle of Grodek he was placed in the helpless position of being left in charge of nearly 100 serious casualties without any proper training or medical facilities. It was a nightmarish scene, exaccerbated by the sight of the corpses of men hung for desertiondisplayed outside the casualty station. Trakl suffered a breakdown and was removed to Cracow where he was diagnosed as suffering from schizophrenia. At the beginningn of November 1914, at the age of 27, he committed suicide by taking an overdose of cocaine.

France - Incorrect!  France

The major clue to the poem's origin is the title, 'Grodek', which depicts a battle fought on the Eastern Front in 1914. By this it is meant the front line between the Central Powers and Russia, not the Western Front or the Italian Front.

Italy - Incorrect!  Italy

The major clue to the poem's origin is the title, 'Grodek', which depicts a battle fought on the Eastern Front in 1914. By this it is meant the front line between the Central Powers and Russia, not the Western Front or the Italian Front.

Battlefield

Battlefield

Yielding clod lulls iron off to sleep
bloods clot the patches where they oozed
rusts crumble
fleshes slime

sucking lusts around decay. (5)
Murder on murder
blinks
in childish eyes.

Notes

Battlefield (Title)
This is a poem of impressions not descriptions, which together form the poets response to a modern-day battlefield. It is short, and modernist in its approach.

rusts crumble / fleshes slime (Ll. 3-4)
Man and machine suffer the same fate. These short lines, mirroring each other (and thus suggesting the thematic link) come after two longer lines which again, link metal to flesh.

Murder on murder (L. 6)
The slaughter is repetitive, unceasing. Yet the poet chooses to criminalise the act of killing not glorify it.

blinks / in childish eyes (Ll. 7-8)
The bewilderment and fear of the poet, witnessing the hellish scene, is accentuated here.

 

Great Britain - Incorrect!  Great Britain

The poem was originally written in German, and the poet died on the Eastern Front in 1915. His style is very much of the modern approach, and he published in one of the main expressionist jornals of the pre-War period.

German Empire - Correct!  German Empire

'Battlefield' or 'Schlachtfeld' as it was entitled in the original version was written by the German poet August Stramm (1874 - 1915). Although there are no direct clues in the poem itself the style is modernist, almost imagist, and is typical of Stramm's poetry (notably the tailing off towards an unresolved ending, allowing rhythm and sound to dispense with syntax). Stramm was born in Münster, Westphalia, Germany. He conducted his studies part-time whilst working for the post office, and gained his doctorate in 1909. His artistic pursuits included, drama, music, and painting, as well as poetry (an example of which is presented here). He developed a great friendship with Herwarth Walden, editor of Der Sturm, and published many poems in this major expressionist journal. He was called up at the outbreak of War and in January 1915 he became Commander of 9 Company III Battalion, fighting at St Quentin on the Western Front. He was awarded the Iron Cross 2nd Class and was due to receive the 1st Class when he was killed on the 1st September 1915 at the Dnepr-Bug Canal on the Eastern Front having been transfered there in the April of that year. He died leaving a widow (the novelist Else Krafft) and two children.

 

The poem in its original is as follows:

 

Schlactfeld

 

Schollenmürbe schläfert ein das Eisen
Blute filzen Sickerflecke
Roste krumen
Fleische schleimen
Saugen brünstet um Zerfallen.
Mordesmorde
Blinzen
Kinderblicke.

 

Schollenmürbe schläfert ein das Eisen
Blute filzen Sickerflecke
Roste krumen
Fleische schleimen
Saugen brünstet um Zerfallen.
Mordesmorde
Blinzen
Kinderblicke.

United States - Incorrect!  United States

The poem was originally written in German, and the poet died on the Eastern Front in 1915. His style is very much of the modern approach, and he published in one of the main expressionist jornals of the pre-War period.

Austria-Hungary - Incorrect!  Austrian Empire

However you are close. The original poem was written in German with the title 'Schlachtfeld' and the poet died in 1915 fighting for the Central Powers on the Eastern front.

France - Incorrect!  France

The poem was originally written in German, and the poet died on the Eastern Front in 1915. His style is very much of the modern approach, and he published in one of the main expressionist jornals of the pre-War period.

Italy - Incorrect!  Italy

The poem was originally written in German, and the poet died on the Eastern Front in 1915. His style is very much of the modern approach, and he published in one of the main expressionist jornals of the pre-War period.

An Imperial Elegy

An Imperial Elegy

Not one corner of a foreign field
But a span as wide as Europe;

An appearance of a titan's grave,
And the length thereof a thousand miles,
It crossed all Europe like a mystic road, (5)
Or as the Spirits' Pathway lieth on the night.
And I heard a voice crying
This is the Path of Glory.

Notes

An Imperial Elegy (Title)
'Imperial' in this sense relates to the, or an, Empire. 'Elegy' can mean a reflection on the past, an acceptance of the transience of worldly goods, but more specifically a lamentation for the dead.

Not one corner of a foreign field / But a span as wide as Europe (Ll. 1–2)
The first line clearly reflects Rupert Brooke's opening to his fifth sonnet 'The Soldier':

If I should die, think only this of me:
That there's some corner of a foreign field
That is for ever England.(Ll. 1–3)

However here, the corner, i.e. the loss of an individual soldier, is magnified to an enormous all-encompassing grave that covers the whole of Europe.

titan's (L. 3)
One of the giants of Greek mythology, again used by the poet to illustrate the size of the grave.

Spirits' Pathway (L. 6)
Edith Nesbit uses a similar image in her 'The Three Kings' (1911):

On the spirit's pathway the light still lies
Though the star be hid from our longing eyes.
(Ll. 43–44)

Here the pathway is the 'mystic road', the way of the dead taken by the spirits of the killed soldiers.

This is the Path of Glory (L. 8)
The line reflects the opening title of 'Elegy', refering here to Thomas Gray's 'Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard':

The paths of glory lead but to the grave.
(L. 36)

 

Great Britain - Correct!  Great Britain

'An Imperial Elegy' was written by the British poet Wilfred Owen (1893-1918) - a fuller chronology of his life and works are given in Tutorial One. It survives as a fragment but is illustrative of Owen's attitude to the War and its predicted aftermath. Although the style of the poem is not immediately recognisable as Owen's (there are no colloquialisms or elements of pararhyme), the vision behind it most definitely is. Owen's strongest poems are when he rises above the concerns of the individual and looks at the wider consequences of the War.

 

Clues within the poem to the nationaility of the poet are few, however. Britain was not the only nation to claim an empire in 1914 (indeed the target of the poem could be the German Empire, the Austro-Hungarian Empire, or imperialism as a whole). Nevertheless the direct references to Rupert Brooke's poem and Gray's 'Elegy' do indicate, at the very least, a good knowledge of English poetry.

German Empire - Incorrect!  German Empire

The title of the poem, with its imperialist overtones does suggest a European observer and the use of the deictic 'this' in line 8 implies a sense of involvement, of the poet being part of the War not remote from it.. However, the references to Brooke and Gray indicate a good knowledge of English literature which may indicate an Anglophone (though not necessarily of course).

United States - Incorrect!  United States

The references to Brooke and Gray do indicate a good knowledge of English literature which may point towards an American poet. Similarly, the detatched stance and anti-European/imperialist viewpoint, could indicate a remoteness from the War, possibly an observer looking across the Atlantic at the carnage in Europe. Indeed it is certainly true that many Americans preferred to adopt an attitude of 'isolation' which was popular during, and notably after the War. However, the poem was written when public opinion in the US was moving towards involvement on the side of the Allies. Furthermore the use of the deictic 'this' in line 8 implies a sense of involvement, of the poet being part of the War not remote from it.

Austria-Hungary - Incorrect!  Austrian Empire

The title of the poem, with its imperialist overtones does suggest a European observer and the use of the deictic 'this' in line 8 implies a sense of involvement, of the poet being part of the War not remote from it.. However, the references to Brooke and Gray indicate a good knowledge of English literature which may indicate an Anglophone (though not necessarily of course).

France - Incorrect!  France

The title of the poem, with its imperialist overtones does suggest a European observer and the use of the deictic 'this' in line 8 implies a sense of involvement, of the poet being part of the War not remote from it.. However, the references to Brooke and Gray indicate a good knowledge of English literature which may indicate an Anglophone (though not necessarily of course).

Italy - Incorrect!  Italy

The title of the poem, with its imperialist overtones does suggest a European observer and the use of the deictic 'this' in line 8 implies a sense of involvement, of the poet being part of the War not remote from it.. However, the references to Brooke and Gray indicate a good knowledge of English literature which may indicate an Anglophone (though not necessarily of course).

Breaking Camp

Breaking Camp

Once before, fanfares tore to blood my impatient heart
So, like a rearing horse that bit its mouth apart.
Then, the march of drumbeats drove the storm along the ways,
And most wonderful music of the earth sent us bullet sprays.
Then, suddenly, life stood still. 
Paths led between old trees. (5)
Rooms beckoned. It was sweet, to stay awhile and be at ease,
The body from reality released as from dusty armour freed,
To lie voluptuously in the feather down of soft dreams' bed.
But one morning through mist air the echo of signals rolled
Hard, sharp, a singing sword-thrust. As if fingers of light in the dark took hold. (10)
It was as when trumpets' blare through dawn bivouacs sound,
Sleepers spring to action, camp is broken, horses paw the ground.

I was lined in ranks that pushed into the dawn, fire over helmet and saddle
Forwards, in the eyes and in the blood, with stiff-held reins, the battle.
At day's end, perhaps, paeans for us would play, (15)
Perhaps under the dead somewhere stretched out we lay.
Yet before the stir to arms and before to earth we sink
Full and gleaming our eyes would of the world and sunlight drink.

Notes

Breaking Camp (Title)
An alternative title for the poem is 'Decampment', i.e. when an army packs up its things, and moves on (in this case to battle).
 
fanfares tore to blood my impatient heart (L1.)
By placing this in the past the poet implies that such emotions have passed, and may have been the result of youthful impetuosity. The celebratory tone of 'fanfares' is notable, as is the impatience the young man feels for enlisting.
 
And most wonderful music of the earth sent us bullet sprays (L 4.)
The poet fuses the man-made bullets with the natural rain (the 'sprays'). Again he/she uses sound effectively, highlighting the excitement that was originally felt in training.
 
Then, suddenly, life stood still. (L. 5)
This short, puctuated line, is the turning point of the poem. The vigour and excitement in the previous lines comes to an abrupt stop. Life, indeed individual existence, stops. Suddenly the poet (and his freinds) yearn for such basic luxuries as a room (l. 6), bed and sleep.
 
But one morning...horses paw the grounds. (Ll. 9-12
The dreams of basic comforts in the previous lines are immediately dispersed. In a series of sounds and actions the frantic activity of decamping a troop of cavalry is described.
 
lined in ranks (L. 13)
Again the point that normal life has stopped is reinforced here. The soldier is merely a pawn, a piece of the jigsaw, a cog in the enormous military machine. He does not join the ranks, or move into them, he is lined up as if he was a piece of machinery.

Great Britain - Incorrect!  Great Britain

The poet did live in England for many years studying at Magdalen College, Oxford. Indeed his greatest academic achievement was a lengthy study of German Shakespearean criticism. Furthermore one could possibly see a glorification
of the war in these verses similar to the poetry of Julian Grenfell (though this is unfair as the poem was actually written before 1913). However he was born in Colmar in the Alsace region.

German Empire - Correct!  German Empire

The poem was written by the German poet Ernst Stadler (1883-1914). However, to simply state that Stadler was German would be to oversimplify somewhat. As Cross states (1988, p. 101), Stadler 'was European'. He was born in Colmar in the Alsace region (now France), an area often contested by Germany (previously Prussia) and France. He was educated at Strasburg University and in 1906, as a Rhodes Scholar, he studied at Magdalen College in Oxford. His love for England (and in particular Shakespeare) became apparent at this time. In 1910, however, he left England and began work at the Université Libre in Brussels. Coupled with his pan-european experiences, Stadler worked with René Schikele on bettering cultural relations between France and Germany. In 1914 however, at the outbreak of war he enlisted with the German Army. He was awarded the Iron Cross in October but was killed in action at the first Battle of Ypres on the 30th October. 'Breaking Camp' is entitled 'Der Aufbruch' originally, and suffers from the fact that it was written before 1913. It is often cited as glorifying war but Stadler should never be accused of such things. He was as quick to see the stupidity fo war, and to criticise is, as any of his contemporaries. It is noted that he first heard about the outbreak of War at a meeting of poets in Alsace. When the news broke the poets stood up and sang the Marsellaise. For Stadler, therefore, like many people, the War presented a series of terrible choice.

United States - Incorrect!  United States

The poem presented here is a translation. It was actually written well before the outbreak of the war when the poet was a lecturer at the University Libré in Brussels.

 

 

Austria-Hungary - Incorrect!  Austrian Empire

The poem was originally written in German, and the poet did fight for the Central Powers but not in the Austrian army.

France - Incorrect!  France

The poem presented here is a translation. It was actually written well before the outbreak of the war when the poet was a lecturer at the University Libré in Brussels.

Italy - Incorrect!  Italy

The poem presented here is a translation. It was actually written well before the outbreak of the war when the poet was a lecturer at the University Libré in Brussels.